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Mek's Conquest (Reboot) Chpt 1 The Beginnening pg by Goodlyman100
Mek's Conquest (Reboot) Chpt 1 The Beginnening pg
Here it is. The first page of the reboot of Mek's Conquest. I did all the coloring in Photoshop because I feel like it looks better that way? The next page may be done in adobe illustrator because I here that program is better suited for things like this. If you have any criticism, like for instance the text is too light or something, please let me know. I wanna hear what you have to say.

Here's the original first page for cross reference

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I thought I'd ask if anyone was interested, but I think Im gonna do it. I dont want to do change anything too major. The characters will be the same, I just think the older pages need an art update, a few spelling errors need fixing, and Im not sure if the story is very solid yet. It feels like I'm forcing things to happen without any reel set up. like the story kind of just stopped in order for me to introduce Sal. I'm already writing some minor revisions but I'd like to hear other opinions on this
I thought I'd ask if anyone was interested, but I think Im gonna do it. I dont want to do change anything too major. The characters will be the same, I just think the older pages need an art update, a few spelling errors need fixing, and Im not sure if the story is very solid yet. It feels like I'm forcing things to happen without any reel set up. like the story kind of just stopped in order for me to introduce Sal. I'm already writing some minor revisions but I'd like to hear other opinions on this

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UszatyArbuz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015   Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav, have a wonderful day! :la:
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Goodlyman100 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
thank you
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Chamjari Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
appreciated
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BUdraw-81 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
Thanks for the:iconfav3dplz:!
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theawesomeflee Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I still have nightmares
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Goodlyman100 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
yeah game programming is hard.
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theawesomeflee Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I will never ever give up on organism, your designs are much too precious to just throw away. Though the harsh reality is I'm incompetent when it comes to making games so I guess I'll have to wait until an opportunity arises with it. Until then I can just look at derphog and weep.
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Goodlyman100 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
oh okay. Hey have you given up on organism or is that still a thing?
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theawesomeflee Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good. I've finally gotten off my fat backside and started to work on something which is actually manageable for me, so there's that.
(It's super secret though so you didn't hear anything...)
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Goodlyman100 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
hows your life been?
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